Talk:Burning Glory/@comment-26844145-20181129115350

Parts of this are very... odd.

-Atlas is introduced as a knight, but later on tries to punch rather than a sword or any kind or weapon.

-Meron suddenly develops feelings for Rocawk.

-Somewhat nitpicky on this one, Rocawk should be do something more while taking Atlas' punches than just stare him down like following the barrage with one arm with some wind barrier.

-Atlas doesn't react to Rocawk not budging to the barrage, which before he seemingly believed that he could fell him with it.

-If that single attack could be heard across the entire world,then everyone even remotely close to the kingdom would of died from the shockwaves alone (unless you mean to say they aren't exactly human).

-The collapse should mention buildings collapsing and people screaming, as it is right now it just seemed like they died instantly or just stood still.

-Who the hell is Meghaine and where did they come from.

-No one seemed to have cared about the king dying.

-Logically Meron would still be the next ruler even with the kingdom's destruction, since there are implied survivors of the wreck. Rocawk would be a ruler in this case too since they've wed.